Healthy Lifestyles

1. There are many options for the food teenagers eat for breakfast [k3: repetition—rephrase to avoid redundancy] / what teenagers typically have as their first meal of the day. I am doing a project aimed at establishing what teenagers usually eat for breakfast. I have found some data. The results of the opinion poll are  organised in the form of a table, which is going to ne [k5: spelling mistake] be analysed below. / The poll results are presented in a table and will be analyzed in this report.

2. According to the data [k5-syntax],  14 per cent of the respondents prefer to eat cereals for the breakfast [k4: incorrect article use] for breakfast. In addition, / In contrast, the minority of those asked [k3: unnatural phrasing] only a small percentage of the [k4] respondents/ interviewees -- 5 per cent -- [k5- Write a dash here] prefer yogurt as a meal for the breakfast [k4: incorrect article use] for breakfast. / in the morning [to avoid tautology].3. Another important fact is that one fifth of the survey participants  --20 percent -- eat egg-bassed [k5: spelling mistake] egg-based dishes for the breakfast [k3: incorrect article use] for breakfast. 

4. As the data indicates, / What stand out in the table is that more than [k3] over twice as many teenagers prefer sandwiches to fruit as a meal [k3-wrong word: "eal" means "трапеза" and substitutes "breakfast", "lunch", "dinner"]  their breakfast dish  / for the breakfast [k3: incorrect article use] for breakfast—53 [k4: incorrect number—should be 43] 43 and 18 percent, respectively. It can be explained by the fact that sandwich is more delicious food than fruit, so teenagers select sandwiches. [k3: unnatural phrasing] This trend can be attributed to the fact that sandwiches are considered tastier and more filling (сытные) than fruit, making them a preferred choice among teenagers.

5. There is a problem that can arise when people have a breakfast [k3: incorrect article use] have breakfast / when having a morning meal. People may do not how [k4: incorrect verb structure] not know how to prepare tasty and healthy food. To address this issue, people [k3: tautology] one can find in the internet [k3: incorrect preposition—use "on"] on the internet good recipes. / To solve this issue, individuals can explore online resources for nutritious and delicious recipes.

6. In conclusion, I believe that breakfast is really important for teenagers. I think so, because it is very bad for the stomach, when people do not eat in the morning. [k3: unnatural phrasing—use more formal structure] I hold this view because skipping breakfast can have a negative impact on digestion and overall health. / From my perspective, having breakfast is crucial for teenagers as it provides essential energy for the day ahead.