Interview with Sherlock Holmes

Host: Welcome everyone! Today I, Emily Wilson, will be your host. I am most honored to introduce our guest, Sherlock Holmes, the iconic figure who shaped our idea of how detectives look like [k3: incorrect construction] what detectives look like, work, and act. Mr. Holmes solved numerous cases and is quite renowned all over the world [k3: redundant] worldwide. So, Mr. Holmes, how are you finding the modern world?

Sherlock Holmes: Yes, thank you. The pleasure is all mine. Well, the most intriguing thing about modern London is the metropolis itself. I would have imagined [k4: incorrect conditional] had imagined it would evolve beyond my imagination [k3: tautology] expectations, and yet, it is one of the most unpleasant places I've visited. / I had imagined it would develop in ways beyond my wildest expectations. It's such a brilliant invention [k3: unclear reference] The city itself is a remarkable creation, and yet, it looks like the government has no intention of modernizing it.

Host: Oh yes, it is a very interesting point [k3: unnatural phrasing] that is an interesting perspective. For such a popular public transport, it sure hasn't evolved at all [k3: overly informal] it certainly has not advanced. Now, I am very curious about your career choice. What would you be if not a detective?

Sherlock Holmes: I have not thought about that at all, Ms. Wilson. Also, congratulations on your divorce! [k3: inappropriate in context] I see you have recently undergone a life change. Well, I suppose I would be a politician. I find mind games exciting, and somebody has to keep Mycroft on his toes, yes?

Host: Oh wow! How did you know [k3:wrong word] learn / find out about my divorce?

Sherlock Holmes: Well, the tan line on your ring finger suggests that you’ve only recently stopped wearing a wedding ring. It was a fair assumption to make.

Host: You truly are amazing, Mr. Holmes. What would you say your favorite case is and why?

Sherlock Holmes: It has to be, as my dear friend Watson has named it, The Adventure of the Norwood Builder. It really was a supposedly perfect crime—hot for the culprit’s attempts to perfect it even more. [k3: unclear and awkward phrasing] especially given the culprit’s efforts to refine it further. It really shows a glimpse into the labyrinth of the human mind.

Host: That is very interesting indeed. I immensely enjoy the titles that Dr. Watson came up with [k1: informal] created for your cases.

Sherlock Holmes: Oh yes, he is very imaginative.

Host: Well, Mr. Holmes, I would like to ask you one last question. What advice would you give to aspiring detectives who want to follow in your footsteps?

Sherlock Holmes: To rely less on technology and artificial intelligence. The crimes of humankind should be solved by humans, not by robots. Always remember that every small detail matters.

Host: Thank you very much for this honor. Your insights were most welcome.

Sherlock Holmes: My pleasure.

Socialization issues_infographics analysis

1. Nowadays, modern technology allows access to almost any kind [k4: missing article—"kind" is a countable noun] of information daily. Technology allows access to almost any kind of information and resources needed, which can serve as a substitute for social interaction. Modern technology allows for [k4: unnecessary preposition] people to have remote jobs, which drastically reduces spontaneous socialization.

2. The overall lifestyle of people has changed with more interests that concern only one person instead of several. We can prove this by comparing data before COVID-19 and after. Judging by the bar chart [k3: incorrect reference—data is from a pie chart] pie chart, there was already a decline before 2020, although the numbers were still high. After COVID-19, the numbers were very low, but there was a noted increase over the last 3 years.

3. The decline in socializing greats [k5: spelling mistake] greatly affects mental well-being.

4. The lack of social interactions weakens emotions bands [k3: incorrect collocation] emotional bonds, increases the feeling of loneliness, and etc. [k3: redundancy—"etc." already implies "and"] and isolation.

5. Regular communication boosts empathy and connection, develops emotional intelligence, and is generally good for mental health.

6. How can people and communities reverse this trend? [k1: no introduction to the question—should be smoothly integrated] An important question to consider is how people and communities can reverse this trend.

7. There are many possibl [k5: spelling mistake] possible solutions to this problem. In work places [k3: incorrect word choice—"workplace" is one word] In workplaces, team-bonding activities must be encouraged, and working from home made [k4: incorrect verb form—use passive voice] should be made less beneficial. There must be organised [k4: incorrect passive voice construction] More real-life events should be organized to bring people with shared interests together. Overall, socializing and communicating face-to-face must be encouraged by all means necessary.

1. Nowadays, modern technology allows access to almost any kind [k4: missing article—"kind" is a countable noun] of information daily. Technology allows access to almost any kind of information and resources needed, which can serve as a substitute for social interaction. Modern technology allows for [k4: unnecessary preposition] people to have remote jobs, which drastically reduces spontaneous socialization.

2. The overall lifestyle of people has changed with more interests that concern only one person instead of several. We can prove this by [k1: inappropriate style—use passive voice in analytical writing] This can be demonstrated by comparing data before COVID-19 and after. Judging by the bar chart [k3: incorrect reference—data is from a pie chart] pie chart, there was already a decline before 2020, although the numbers were still high. After COVID-19, the numbers were very low, but there was a noted increase over the last 3 years.

3. The decline in socializing greats [k5: spelling mistake] greatly affects mental well-being.

4. The lack of social interactions weakens emotions bands [k3: incorrect collocation] emotional bonds, increases the feeling of loneliness, and etc. [k3: redundancy—"etc." already implies "and"] and isolation.

5. Regular communication boosts empathy and connection, develops emotional intelligence, and is generally good for mental health.

6. How can people and communities reverse this trend? [k1: no introduction to the question—should be smoothly integrated] An important question to consider is how people and communities can reverse this trend.

7. There are many possibl [k5: spelling mistake] possible solutions to this problem. In work places [k3: incorrect word choice—"workplace" is one word] In workplaces, team-bonding activities must be encouraged, and working from home made [k4: incorrect verb form—use passive voice] should be made less beneficial. There must be organised [k4: incorrect passive voice construction] More real-life events should be organized to bring people with shared interests together. Overall, socializing and communicating face-to-face must be encouraged by all means necessary.

1. Nowadays, modern technology allows [k3: repetition] technology provides access to almost any kind [k4: missing article—"kind" is a countable noun] of information daily. Technology allows [k3: repetition] technology grants access to almost any kind of information and resources needed, which can serve as a substitute for social interaction. Modern technology allows [k3: repetition] technology enables for [k4: unnecessary preposition] people to have remote jobs, which drastically reduces spontaneous socialization. / With the advancement of modern technology, individuals can access nearly any type of information daily, reducing spontaneous social interaction.

2. The overall lifestyle of people has changed with more interests that concern only one person instead of several. We can prove this by [k1: inappropriate style—use passive voice in analytical writing] This can be demonstrated by comparing data before COVID-19 and after. Judging by the bar chart [k3: incorrect reference—data is from a pie chart] pie chart, there was already a decline before 2020, although the numbers were still high. After COVID-19, the numbers were very low, but there was a noted increase over the last 3 years. / The way people socialize has evolved, shifting toward individualistic activities rather than collective ones.

3. The decline in socializing greats [k5: spelling mistake] greatly affects mental well-being.

4. The lack of social interactions weakens emotions bands [k3: incorrect collocation] emotional bonds, increases the feeling of loneliness, and etc. [k3: redundancy—"etc." already implies "and"] and isolation. / A decline in social interactions erodes emotional connections, heightens loneliness, and fosters isolation.

5. Regular communication boosts empathy and connection, develops emotional intelligence, and is generally good for mental health.

6. How can people and communities reverse this trend? [k1: no introduction to the question—should be smoothly integrated] An important question to consider is how people and communities can reverse this trend. / A crucial consideration is the methods available for people and communities to counteract this decline in socialization.

7. There are many possibl [k5: spelling mistake] possible solutions to this problem. In work places [k3: incorrect word choice—"workplace" is one word] In workplaces, team-bonding activities must be encouraged, and working from home made [k4: incorrect verb form—use passive voice] should be made less beneficial. There must be organised [k4: incorrect passive voice construction] More real-life events should be organized to bring people with shared interests together. Overall, socializing and communicating face-to-face must be encouraged by all means necessary. / Encouraging real-world interactions and discouraging excessive remote work can foster stronger social connections.

1. Nowadays, modern technology allows/ provides access to almost any kind of information daily. Technology allows [k3: repetition] digital advancements grant access to almost any kind of information and resources needed, which can serve as a substitute for social interaction. Modern technology allows [k3: repetition] innovations enable for [k4: unnecessary preposition] people to have remote jobs, which drastically reduces spontaneous socialization. / With the advancement of modern technology, individuals can access nearly any type of information daily, reducing spontaneous social interaction.

2. The overall lifestyle of people has changed with more interests that concern only one person instead of several. We can prove this by [k1: inappropriate style—use passive voice in analytical writing] This can be demonstrated by comparing data before COVID-19 and after. Judging by the bar-chart, there was already a decline before 2020 [k3: primitive wording] A decline had been evident even prior to 2020, although the numbers were still high. After COVID-19, the numbers were very low, but there was a noted increase over the last 3 years. 

3. The decline in socializing greats [k5: spelling mistake] greatly affects mental well-being.

4. As a direct consequence, that the lack of social interactions weakens emotions bands [k3: incorrect collocation] emotional bonds, increases the feeling of loneliness, and etc. [k3: redundancy—"etc." already implies "and"] and isolation. / A decline in social interactions erodes emotional connections, heightens loneliness, and fosters isolation.

5. Conversely, regular communication boosts empathy and connection, develops emotional intelligence, and is generally good for mental health. / On the other hand, regular interaction fosters empathy, strengthens social bonds, and enhances emotional intelligence. / Meanwhile, maintaining active social engagement nurtures emotional well-being, deepens interpersonal relationships, and supports psychological resilience.

6. How can people and communities reverse this trend? [k1: no introduction to the question—should be smoothly integrated] An important question to consider is how people and communities can reverse this trend. / A crucial consideration is the methods available for people and communities to counteract this decline in socialization.

7. There are many possibl [k5: spelling mistake] possible solutions to this problem. In work places [k3: incorrect word choice—"workplace" is one word] In workplaces, team-bonding activities must be encouraged, and working from home made [k4: incorrect verb form—use passive voice] should be made less beneficial. There must be organised [k4: incorrect passive voice construction] More real-life events should be organized to bring people with shared interests together. Overall, socializing and communicating face-to-face must be encouraged by all means necessary. / Encouraging real-world interactions and discouraging excessive remote work can foster stronger social connections. / Promoting face-to-face engagement while limiting excessive remote work can enhance social cohesion and reinforce meaningful relationships.