Homework Check_14/04/2026

The tour guides showed us around the old city who [k4: incorrect relative pronoun ] which were was fantastic .

Do you know, [k5: syntax- NO COMMA before complementary clauses =перед придаточными изъяснительными они не ставят запятые] if she is moving to a different department?

Whether the cabins be available can you tell me? [k4: incorrect word order + k4: wrong verb form] Can you tell me whether the cabins are available?

What time does it start?

Do you know how much does the tickets cost [k4: incorrect word order + k4: wrong subject-verb agreement] the tickets cost?

What is the water temperature like  this time of year?

Have you done [k3: unnatural collocation] made a shopping list?

What recipes will you learn?

She wanted to know where she could buy a copy.

I used the study guide that was provided by a professor [k4: wrong article / k3: inaccurate wording] the professor.

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Dear editor,

I hope you are doing well. I want to describe my appreciate on [k3: inaccurate word choice + k3: unnatural collocation] express my appreciation for your work and congrats with [k1: style/register + k3: unnatural collocation] congratulate you on new magazine [k4: wrong article] the new magazine. it’s [k5: capitalization error + k1: no short forms in formal writing] It is really fascinating. Like [k4: missing subject] I like your style and the website design.

I’ve bundled into [k5: wrong spelling + k3: inaccurate word choice] run into some problems with the application form, while i [k5: capitalization error] I was submitting my poems. So, could you help with this [k3: vague wording] me with this issue and check my submission?

Sincerely,
Kate

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I think it is a great idea. Volunteerism canincrease [k3: unnatural collocation] develop patience and communication ability of teenagers [k3: unnatural phrasing + k4: incorrect number form] teenagers’ patience and communication skills. Moreover, it will play an incredible role for [k4: wrong preposition] in real health care organisations which really need help sometimes [k5: syntax + k3: vague/weak phrasing] , which often need additional support. Consequently [k2: incorrect linking] However, it is clear that pupils don’t [k1: no short forms in formal writing] do not have enough time for that, so it shouldn’t [k1: no short forms in formal writing] should not be obligatory or may be included into [k4: wrong modal verb + k4: wrong preposition] included in the school curriculum.

TOEFL Writing Score: 2 / 4

The message is understandable and mostly relevant, but frequent vocabulary and grammar problems make it sound less natural and less formal. You show the ability to communicate the main idea, but the language needs better accuracy and more appropriate expressions.

Overall comment: The letter generally answers the task and has a clear polite purpose, but the language control is limited.

Criteria

• Task fulfilment [k1]: You address the situation and asks for help with the submission. However, the ideas could be developed more clearly.
• Organisation[k2]: The letter has a basic structure: greeting, main message, request, and closing. However, some transitions are weak.
• Grammar[k4, k5-spelling]: There are noticeable grammar mistakes, for example missing subjects, capitalization errors, and incorrect sentence structure.
• Vocabulary[k3]: Several collocations are unnatural, such as describe my appreciate on, congrats with, and bundled into.
• Register[k1]: The tone is polite, but some expressions are too informal for a letter to an editor, for example congrats.

 

What would improve the score

• Use formal collocations: express my appreciation for, congratulate you on, run into a problem.
• Avoid contractions in formal letters: it is, I have.
• Capitalize I.
• Make the request more specific and polite.

Homework for April 17. 26

TOEFL Letter

Dear administrator,

Hope [k1: style/register - incomplete informal phrase] I hope you are doing well.

I had found [k4: wrong tense] found your course in [k4: wrong preposition] on the Internet, and I want [k1: style/register - use a more formal expression] would like to clarify some details about it. So, could you help me with that. [k5: syntax - question mark needed + k1: slightly informal/vague phrasing] Could you please help me with the following questions? What is the price of the course? Are there payments per hour or a membership? [k3: unnatural phrasing] Is payment charged per hour, or is there a membership fee? If I attend, can I bring my own yacht, or you provide [k4: incorrect word order] do you provide all features [k3: inaccurate word choice] equipment? If you provide the equipment, what kind of yachts are available?

Regards,
Kate

I found your course online and would like to clarify several details. Could you please tell me the price of the course and whether payment is charged per hour or through a membership fee? I would also like to know whether students may bring their own yachts or whether all necessary equipment is provided by the school. If the equipment is provided, could you please specify what types of yachts are available?

Too many direct questions, which sounds too straightforward. Try to avoid them using indirect questions instead. You can start them with phrases like 'I would aldo like to know..." or "Could you also inform me on...?". or" Could you please specify/tell/quote/explain +noun (the price/rules/conditions/etc.)"

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TOEFL Academic Discussion Response

I suppose that space exploration is a significant step in science, [k5: syntax - comma splice] because it demonstrates how many abilities [k3: inaccurate word choice] capabilities we have nowadays and how technological progress was improved [k4: wrong voice + k3: unnatural phrasing] has advanced in previous decades. For instance, one day traveling [k5: no spelling consistency - use either British or American spelling throughout] travelling to Mars became [k4: wrong tense] may become similar to Maldives [k4: wrong article] the Maldives, and no one would say it has been [k4: wrong tense] was unnessasary [k5: wrong spelling] unnecessary to investigate. Consequently [k2: incorrect linking] Admittedly, Claudio is right about millions of funds spent on it [k3: unnatural phrasing + k4: incorrect number form] the enormous amounts of money spent on it, which can be invested in health facilities. But in the times when [k3: unnatural phrasing] at a time when people overpopulate the Earth [k3: unnatural phrasing] are putting increasing pressure on the Earth’s resources, exploring new abilities [k3: inaccurate word choice] possibilities is the solution [k3: overgeneralisation / inaccurate wording] one possible solution.

I suppose that space exploration is a significant step in science because it shows how far human capabilities and technological progress have advanced in recent decades. For instance, one day travelling to Mars may become as common as travelling to the Maldives, and then few people would argue that space research was unnecessary. Admittedly, Claudio is right that enormous amounts of money are spent on space exploration and that these funds could be invested in health care facilities. However, at a time when humanity is putting increasing pressure on the Earth’s resources, exploring new possibilities beyond our planet may become one possible long-term solution.

April 20, 04, 2026 TOEFL Letter Check

Dear Sir or Madam,

I found your course online and I would like to clarify several details. I am interested in enrolling in Wind Turbine Technician Program[k4: wrong article] the Wind Turbine Technician Program.

Firstly[k1: slightly mechanical linking] First of all, could you let me know if beginners are accepted for [k4: wrong preposition] accepted onto(BrE)/into (AmE) , because I do not have experience in this field. Also, I would like to ask whether a mild fear og[k5: wrong spelling] of heights could affect on[k4: wrong preposition] affect __ my participating[k4: misuse of a verbal- sounds too heavy and unnatural] participation in the lessons.

First of all, could you please let me know whether beginners are accepted onto/into the course, as I do not have any experience in this field? I would also like to ask whether a mild fear of heights could affect my participation in the practical classes.

Secondly[k2: overused linking word, mechanical linking] In addition, my English level is intermediate and I would like to know if it is surfficient[k5: wrong spelling] sufficient to attend the course.

In addition, my English level is intermediate, and I would like to know whether it is sufficient for the course.

Finally, could you let me know if any fanancial[k5: wrong spelling] financial aid is provided of[k4: wrong preposition] for the tutation[k5: wrong spelling] tuition fees[k2: illogical phrase]to cover the tuition fees of the program.

Finally, could you please let me know whether any financial aid is available for the program?

Regards,
Kate

TOEFL Academic Discussion Response

I agree with Daniel, [k5: syntax - comma splice] : a bird in the hand is better than two in the bush [k1: style/register-use more neutral academic wording] it is better to focus on practical solutions that can be implemented now. developing new renewable energy technologies would take a lot of resources, and higher educational institutes [k3: unnatural collocation] higher education institutions would just be in a rush for opportunities which are used in far future [k3: inaccurate word choice + k3: unnatural phrasing + k4: wrong article] simply be investing in opportunities that may only become useful in the distant future.

I agree with Daniel because it is better to focus on practical solutions that can be implemented now. Developing new renewable energy technologies would require considerable resources, and universities might end up investing in opportunities that may only become useful in the distant future.

Moreover, energy is important in everyday life, and it is undoubted [k3: inaccurate word choice] undeniable that it will still be important in near decades [k3: unnatural phrasing] the coming decades, so the first step is to improve what we already have.

Moreover, energy plays a crucial role in everyday life, and it is undeniable that it will remain essential in the coming decades, so the first priority should be to improve the systems that already exist.

The economical increase [k3: inaccurate word choice] Economic growth means also environmental support, [k5: syntax - run-on / incorrect punctuation] . in spite of this fact [k2: incorrect linking + k3: unnatural phrasing] Therefore, it is clear that institutions should improve traditional energy systems to make them more effective and only after explore [k4: wrong verb form + k2: incomplete structure] only after that should they explore new possibilities.

Economic growth can also support environmental progress. Therefore, institutions should first improve traditional energy systems and make them more efficient before exploring new possibilities.

Oral Answer Check

Oral Answer Check

Establishing permanent human settlements on Mars is a realistic and an ethical long-term goal for humanity. [k3: article inconsistency / k3: awkward parallel structure] Establishing permanent human settlements on Mars is a realistic and ethical long-term goal for humanity.

I suppose that establishing permanent humanity [k3: inaccurate word choice] human settlements on Mars is a realistic goal. So, one day it will be really possible to travel there, and it can become a really long-term solution if something will go wrong [k4: wrong tense] goes wrong here on earth [k5: capitalization error] Earth. So, a lot of scientists strongly believe that it is possible, [k5: syntax - comma needed before coordinating clause] and a lot of in the amounts of money [k3: unnatural phrasing] large amounts of money are invested in exploration uh in this exploration uh [k2: redundant block] this area of exploration, so I see it as survival as a survival strategy [k3: redundancy] a survival strategy.

I suppose that establishing permanent human settlements on Mars is a realistic goal. One day, travelling there may become possible, and such a project could serve as a long-term solution if something goes wrong on Earth. Many scientists believe this is achievable, and large amounts of money are already being invested in this field, so I see it as a possible survival strategy for humanity.

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Should space exploration be driven primarily by private companies rather than national space agencies state? State your opinion and support it with reasons.

I suppose that space exploration should be driven [k5: phonetics -/drivn/ ] by national space agencies. If private companies lead, there can be , may be [k5: syntax + k5: wrong spelling] a lot of disadvantages, like profit-driven motives, lack of public [k3: underdeveloped / incomplete idea] public accountability and the risk of monopolizing space.

I believe that space exploration should primarily be led by national space agencies. If private companies take the lead, there may be several disadvantages, such as profit-driven motives, a lack of public accountability, and the risk of monopolising space.

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Does commercial space tourism represent meaningful progress for humanity, or it's [k4: wrong verb form] is it just merely [k3: redundancy] an irresponsible luxury for the wealthy? Give your opinion with example [k4: wrong article] with an example.

In my opinion, commercial space tourism is just an irresponsible luxury for the wealthy. It doesn't bring many benefits for humanity and it's just a waste of resources and fundings [k4: incorrect number form] funding.

If just a rich person [k3: unnatural phrasing] only a wealthy person takes a trip and he isn't contributed [k4: wrong voice + k4: wrong verb form] does not contribute to science, it doesn't [k1: no short forms in formal writing] does not really advance for [k4: wrong preposition + k3: unnatural collocation] advance space exploration.

So, Besides these trips, true space explorers should only travel and explore space. [k2: illogical flow + k3: inaccurate word choice] Therefore, instead of funding such trips, resources should be directed toward real scientific missions carried out by trained astronauts and researchers.

In my opinion, commercial space tourism is an irresponsible luxury for the wealthy rather than meaningful progress for humanity. It does not bring many real benefits and simply wastes resources and funding. If a rich tourist takes a trip to space without contributing to science, this does not significantly advance space exploration. For this reason, money should be invested in genuine scientific missions conducted by trained astronauts and researchers instead.

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Use these Russian translations of your English answers to help you learn your English versions by heart

1. Честно говоря, я не очень интересуюсь экологическими проблемами, но всё же стараюсь быть в курсе. Я понимаю, что устойчивое развитие становится серьёзной глобальной задачей, поэтому в повседневной жизни я предпринимаю небольшие усилия, чтобы вести себя более ответственно.
2. В повседневной жизни я стараюсь делать небольшие, но полезные вещи: например, я сортирую мусор для переработки и стараюсь сократить использование одноразового пластика. Я также предпочитаю ходить пешком или ездить на велосипеде вместо того, чтобы пользоваться машиной.
3. Я считаю, что важно и то, и другое, но правительства играют более значительную роль, потому что они могут вводить масштабные меры и правила, которые влияют на миллионы людей, тогда как действия отдельных людей обычно имеют меньший охват.
4. На мой взгляд, альтернативная энергетика не всегда так эффективна, как люди думают. Она требует больших инвестиций, а выгоды в основном проявляются в долгосрочной перспективе, поэтому в краткосрочной перспективе может быть более практичным улучшать уже существующие энергетические системы.
5. В моей стране предпринимаются некоторые усилия для продвижения более чистой энергии, например установка солнечных панелей в сельских районах. Однако эти меры всё ещё находятся на ранней стадии и пока не получили широкого применения.
6. Экологически устойчивую политику трудно внедрять, потому что люди привыкли к своему образу жизни, поэтому они не хотят платить больше или менять свои привычки. В больших городах и мегаполисах, таких как Москва, просто удобнее ездить на машине и пользоваться обычным электричеством, поэтому переход на солнечные панели может казаться нереалистичным.
7. Самая простая привычка — это сортировать мусор, потому что это легко и быстро. Самая трудная привычка — менять свой образ жизни, например пользоваться общественным транспортом или ходить пешком вместо того, чтобы ездить на машине.
8. Я твёрдо считаю, что устойчивое развитие требует как технологий, так и изменений в образе жизни. Например, города должны быть переустроены так, чтобы в них было удобнее ходить пешком и ездить на велосипеде. Они должны делать жизнь людей проще и в то же время становиться более экологичными.
9. В целом я с оптимизмом смотрю в будущее. Сейчас люди стали более осведомлёнными, и правительство начинает поддерживать политику в области зелёной энергетики. Я считаю, что это займёт время, но мы движемся в правильном направлении.

For May,1, 2026

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May, 3, 2026_Story Check

Write a story about how global warming changed your life.

Global warming is in the eye of the storm [k3: inaccurate word choice -- This idiom means "being in the most intense or dangerous part of a conflict or crisis"] at the centre of attention of every Tv [k5: capitalization error] TV channel nowadays, but do we take it seriously? As for me, [k5: syntax] I am not in the picture [k3: inaccurate word choice -- This idiom can also mean 'to be involved'] not fully in the picture//fully informed but [k5: syntax - comma needed] , but I try to stay informed about main [k3: inaccurate word choice] the main consequences which have started happening already. Global warming is at the centre of attention on almost every TV channel nowadays, but do we really take it seriously? As for me, I am not fully informed, yet I try to keep track of the main consequences that have already begun to appear.

For instance, I have always thought that seasons should go one by one like chapters in a book that always came [k4: wrong tense] come in the same order, but previous years broken [k4: wrong tense + k3: unnatural phrasing] the last few years have broken this mechanism. Winter became more aggressive about [k4: wrong preposition + comma needed] , with 30 degree minus Celsius [k3: unnatural phrasing] degrees below zero and then [k5: syntax - comma needed] , and then spring has disappeared. Summer is cold and [k5: syntax - run-on phrases – separate independent phrases with a full stop or ‘;’] , and heavy tropical rains turn apart [k3: inaccurate word choice] break out. That changed slowly and then all at once. [k2: lack of coherence + k3: vague wording] These changes happened gradually at first and then all at once. For instance, I have always believed that the seasons should follow one another like chapters in a book that always come in the same order, but the last few years have disrupted this pattern. Winters have become harsher, with temperatures dropping to 30 degrees below zero, and then spring seems to vanish altogether. Summers are cold, and heavy tropical rains break out unexpectedly. These changes happened gradually at first and then all at once.

Moreover, my favourite season - [k5: syntax] — spring has became [k4: wrong verb form] become a cold snowy period between hash [k5: wrong spelling] harsh winter and unrealistic [k3: inaccurate word choice] unbearable summer. Every year I was been waiting [k4: wrong verb form] used to wait for flower’s blooming [k4: incorrect possessive case + k3: unnatural collocation] the flowers to bloom and [k5: syntax - comma needed] , and now they do not even try because snow can suddenly fall. Moreover, my favourite season — spring — has become a cold, snowy period between a harsh winter and an unbearable summer. Every year I used to wait for the flowers to bloom, but now they do not even seem to try because snow can suddenly fall again.

At the end of a [k4: wrong article] the day, global warming is no longer just a distant news [k4: incorrect number form] news story//piece of news - [k5: syntax] — it has already stolen my favourite season and changed the rhythm of our life. At the end of the day, global warming is no longer just a distant news story — it has already stolen my favourite season and changed the rhythm of our lives.

Potentially missed or debatable issues

1. our life [k4: incorrect number form or k3: debatable wording] our lives — our lives is more natural here, although the rhythm of life is also possible in a different structure.

2. spring has disappeared [k2: slightly exaggerated / figurative wording] spring seems to have disappeared — the original is understandable in a story, but the softer version may sound more natural.

May,05, 2026

Dear Sir or Madame [k5: wrong spelling] Madam,

I am very interested in attending a skin rejuvenation and microneedling workshop as a model. I would like to [k3: tautology]  could you please clarify several details.

Firstly, I would like to know if acne-prone and sensitive skin is suitable for this procedure and whether allergy [k4: wrong article / number form] an allergy to some cosmetic products would [k4: wrong modal verb] will be tested or medical questionnaire [k4: wrong article] a medical questionnaire will be provided.

Secondly, I would like to know [k3:tautology] could you please inform me whether procedure [k4: wrong article] the procedure is done under professional [k3: inaccurate word choice + k4: wrong article] the supervision of a professional and what recovery time is expected.

Finally, if it possible to attend in sligthly different time [k4: missing verb + k4: wrong preposition + k4: wrong article + k5: spelling mistake] if it is possible to attend at a slightly different time, could you let me know?

Thank you for your attention [k3: unnatural collocation / wrong closing formula -- It is not oa speech)] Thank you in advance for your help. I look forward to your reply.

Kind regards, [k1:Use this formula. It is more suitable for this kind of letter, where y ou want to sound friendly]
Kate A.

1. Task Achievement (≈ 3/5)

The purpose is clear: asking about participation conditions.
All main points are covered (skin suitability, allergies, supervision, timing).
However, questions are not always precisely or naturally formulated, which slightly reduces clarity.

2. Organization & Coherence (≈ 3/5)

Logical structure is present: introduction → questions → closing.
Use of “Firstly / Secondly / Finally” is acceptable but somewhat mechanical.
Some sentences are awkwardly structured, affecting flow.

3. Language Use (≈ 2–3/5)

Frequent issues with:
articles (“procedure,” “medical questionnaire”)
collocations (“done under professional”)
modal choice (“would be tested” instead of “will be tested”)
word order and phrasing
Vocabulary is adequate but not flexible or idiomatic enough for higher scores.

4. Grammar & Accuracy (≈ 2–3/5)

Errors are noticeable but do not block understanding.
Several sentences require reformulation to sound natural.